Wednesday, September 5, 2007

Leads Exercise #3

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The worst accident in Amtrak's history occurred yesterday when an Amtrak train collided with three Conrail locomotives on a switch that merges four tracks into two. The catastrophic accident killed 15 and injured 175.

1 comment:

camccune said...

Start with the news (people were killed!) and tighten it up. Leave the details (switches, merging tracks) for the next graph.